Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Our first ever essay together

The graph provides information about the patterns of domestic access to modern technology in the UK.

Generally, the patterns of all the domestic access rose throughout the six years which is from 1996/97 untill 2002/03. There are four kinds of domestic access studied from this graph, which is CD players, mobile phones, home computers and internet access.

The percentage for CD player rose gradually which is from 60% in 1996/97 to around 80% in 2002/03. It is almost the same for the percentage of home computers. The percentage of home computers rose steadily from around 20% in 1996/97 to around 60% in 2002/03.

By contrast, the percentage for the changing patterns of home computers fluctuated slightly, and the trend was upward. The pattern rose gradually from around 20% in 1996/97 to around 30% 1998/99, then it increased suddenly to around 45% in 1999/2000. Then, it rose gradually to around 47% in 2000/01, followed by a dramatic increase to around 65% in 2001/02. Then it rose back steadily to around 70% in 2002/03.

It is noticeable that the percentage for internet access started in the year 1998/99. It rose rapidly from 10% to 45% in 2002/03. The percentage rose about 35% during the four years period.








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